That was
winter season. All children were happy to play. Because the heavy snow of
winter fallen on the road.
And ten little children came out of the home and covered their body with
socks, sweaters, caps, glouse etc…They felt very happy.
Two
little friends their name peter and Tania. Peter took a shovel and Tania built
a snowman. Peter decorated that snowman’s mouth with his shovel and Tania took
a coal for eyes .
They played like this. Maria and her little sister papa walked on the
road with their dog. They also wanted to build a snowman.
That time Igor came and asked to papa “Can I help you to build a
snowman?” Yes papa replied. Peter’s friend Paul came and called his all friends
and said, my mother prepared snacks to all. All
children came to his home and ate the chestnuts. Paul’s mother pulled the nuts
and peeled also. So the nuts fire didn’t burn their fingers. Papas dog was not
allowed to inside the home, but his
mother gave a tasty bone to it. The dog ate that bone and also all
children came to their home.
L.vijayasri.
The full stop must come after " eyes" not in the new passage.
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