Once upon a time there
lived a king named Robert Bruce lived in Scotland. He was the king of Scotland.
Always he will be winning all the kings.He will treat the kings as servant.
But
one day In the war with the king Charles Greece, All of his soldiers were died.He
accepted his defeat. So Robert Bruce lost in that war.So Robert hide in a
cave.There he saw a spider,which was building a web.In that time it rained
heavily,So the web was broken.
Again it built a new web.Again it
rained heavily.Again the web was broken.Again it built a new web.Now it didn't
rained. The spider was happy
Robert was astonished by the hard
work,confidence and perseverance of the spider.So the king again fought alone
and won the war by his perseverance.This was the moral that the king learned
from the spider.
MORAL: Perseverance, hardwork and
confidence will be giving us the winning streak.
Author: P.S.BRIGHT
BY:R.L.SRIHARI
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ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time,there lived a king named Robert who lived in Scotland.
He will always wins the other kings.
He would always treat the other kings as his servant.
I do not understand the first line in the second paragraph.
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ReplyDelete.................this was the moral that the king who learned from the spider.
For the third paragraph you could use the sentence, it repeated its actions